2020 Hearts & Minds - Saint Peter's University

Saint Peter's University gratefully acknowledges the many
alumni, friends and corporate partners who have supported

Hearts & Minds: The Saint Peter's Scholarship Celebration
and
the General Scholarship Fund.

Please click on the digital journal to read a special letter from
President Eugene J. Cornacchia, Ph.D., and
Susan Mitchell-Abbate '72, trustee and chair of Hearts & Minds,
and
to view all of this year's supporters.

Please save the date of Friday, May 7, 2021 for next year’s Hearts & Minds
when the University will honor
Patricia McQuillan Cummings ’77, Kevin Cummings,
Cheryl Della Rosa and Joseph Della Rosa and
celebrate our entire community of loyal supporters.

The landing page seems a little copy-heavy. Can we tighten it and make it more succinct?
"make your commitment" on the button seems awkward. How about just "make your gift" or "make a gift"?
We mention "commemorative journal" but should articulate that we are now talking about a digital journal.
this copy seems odd above the registration options: " The critical aid that Hearts & Minds delivers for our students each year cannot be forgone, and given the current landscape, many of our students are more vulnerable than ever. A significant number of our undergraduates come from low-to-moderate-income households. More than 98% require financial aid and half cannot afford to contribute anything towards tuition. Most will be the first in their families to earn a college degree."
Instead, how about " Thank you for your support. Your generosity will have direct and immediate impact on the lives of our students who are facing intense challenges as a result of the global health crisis. Supporters will be recognized in a digital journal and in the University magazine."
Also, is this the right header? Hearts & Minds Support Opportunities -- What about: Hearts & Minds Support Opportunities Benefitting the General Scholarship Fund (is that too long?). I am thinking about our ongoing conversation with Mike.
Is May 22 a bit too far out to collect ads?
When you go to the page where you actually fill out your details, can we get rid of this as it is no longer relevant? Hearts & Minds Support Opportunities
Registrants:

Specify all registrants later (The guests can provide this information when checking into the event.)
It would not let me use the bogus credit card number so I can't see the confirmation email.

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